For the first time in this feedback round I recognize the feeling of confusion when reading poetry. This time it's about the glancing on, clancing two. Hmm. I'll have to think about that one or just let it be what it is. I enjoyed the rhyming! I dig your pictures, makes the assignment more alive. :)
Your limerick was not like the ones you usely read and I liked that! It was refreshing with something else rather than the mini-stories that limericks mostly are. Good job!
For the first time in this feedback round I recognize the feeling of confusion when reading poetry. This time it's about the glancing on, clancing two. Hmm. I'll have to think about that one or just let it be what it is. I enjoyed the rhyming!
SvaraRaderaI dig your pictures, makes the assignment more alive. :)
Thanks again, Malin! The "glancing" part is just what it is..it just takes a look around in both directions for me to see that Hell is not for me...=D
SvaraRaderaAnd I like having pictures sometimes, because they, just as you wrote, can amplify a feeling..
Your limerick was not like the ones you usely read and I liked that! It was refreshing with something else rather than the mini-stories that limericks mostly are.
SvaraRaderaGood job!